Random Philosophies

**The Divide** · 24-10-2004, 01:00 AM

This is a head wreak

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/3705.MAwav.mp3

Constructive feedback welcome

**xfive** · 24-10-2004, 01:15 AM

Nice one.. love the congas and the skippy beat. :clap:

**Evil G** · 24-10-2004, 09:30 PM

file not found, so i went ahead and listened to 37_06.mp3. the percussion and all the crazy sound fx sound awesome. i like the synthy parts too. are you planning to add any more synth parts? it does seem like you lose a little bit of continuity when switching between the synth driven parts and the drum driven parts.

neway, keep us posted. lovin it so far.

**The Divide** · 24-10-2004, 10:02 PM

:lol:

I see what you mean with the changes. I think I solved that problem a little with this newer arrangement. Let me know.

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/37_7MA[128].mp3

Maybe I should make it easier to mix?

**Evil G** · 25-10-2004, 12:10 AM

wicked! that nasty distorted part is holding it all together nicely now. this is sick. :)

**The Divide** · 26-10-2004, 10:16 PM

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/au..._09MA(128).mp3

Open to suggestions. My biggest worry is that its too hard to mix?

**Evil G** · 27-10-2004, 02:16 AM

Originally Posted by The Divide

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/au..._09MA(128).mp3

Open to suggestions. My biggest worry is that its too hard to mix?

na. you foreshadow your changes pretty well and the beat is always clear against the craziness.

i would totally buy and play this.

only suggestion i can think of is that it could use a little something leading up to the drop at 4:00. (love the part after it comes back in, btw).

**BloodStar** · 27-10-2004, 10:55 AM

nice. not too much into offbeat stuff, but this is ****ing well produced,., i love the breaks and the crazy synths in it,. i like this,.

**The Divide** · 27-10-2004, 01:50 PM

Originally Posted by Evil G

only suggestion i can think of is that it could use a little something leading up to the drop at 4:00. (love the part after it comes back in, btw).

Glad you said that. Yea something to break it down better. I guess I need to work on a new section there which compliments the main peak that doesn’t loose as much bandwidth & energy.

Thanks

**The Divide** · 27-10-2004, 01:51 PM

Possibly theres a hole somewhere in the lower mids too

**dan the acid man** · 27-10-2004, 08:12 PM

this would seriously mess with your head on a big rig, great stuff

**dirty_bass** · 29-10-2004, 08:41 PM

The production on this is fantastic.
The beginning is so promising. Proper industrial.
But the track seems to lose energy and drive really quickly.
As a dance track this doesn`t really work for me as I keep waiting for some dark vocals to come in, to add flow to the song like structure.
Can you sing?

**The Divide** · 29-10-2004, 10:22 PM

Originally Posted by dirty_bass

The production on this is fantastic.
The beginning is so promising. Proper industrial.
But the track seems to lose energy and drive really quickly.
As a dance track this doesn`t really work for me as I keep waiting for some dark vocals to come in, to add flow to the song like structure.
Can you sing?

What is this pop Idol or something? Can I **** sing man :lol:

**Evil G** · 29-10-2004, 11:35 PM

maybe drink 15 cans of stella and sing through a distortion pedal? :lol:

i've actually had people say the same thing to me - that the structure of my tracks seems to beg for a vocal. the whole songs vs tracks thing, i guess.

**MangaFish** · 30-10-2004, 03:01 PM

i'm no producer, but i like this alot!

**The Divide** · 31-10-2004, 01:46 AM

Still working on this. I thought I would add some darker keys. Its not done yet but I would like to know if theres anything you dont like about this mix. Thanks for the comments so far

www.fobiddensilence.co.uk/audio/37_14ma2.mp3

**The Divide** · 31-10-2004, 01:55 AM

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/37_14ma2.mp3

**dan the acid man** · 31-10-2004, 01:51 PM

damn this is dark and hard, good stuff, but it could do with something else before the break, maybe a vocal would work well with this

**DJ Z** · 31-10-2004, 06:22 PM

yo man...this is very very nice...i like it :clap: ...everything is the way it should be...don't change it !! :!:

**gary_human** · 31-10-2004, 10:55 PM

. . . WOW!!!! :love: That is what I want to listen to next time Im out grooving

- pretty awesome!!

How do you do that ? . . .

makes me laugh inside as Im listening to it

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