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    Junior Freak
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    Default tooltech - bogota part 1 - groovy

    hello.

    here is a track from me

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    its not so good like other tracks on this board, but maybe somebody can give me some tips what i can do better.

    ;)
    www.nightgen.com

    view the page and choose your favourite

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    nice tune man,

    i like the congas, keep working ;)

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    ok mate, heres my tips....firstly i think you have a great base of a tune here, and i do like it, simular to what i like to produce...i think some of the drops dropped a little flat, so try and make them a bit more exciting, maybe dont drop out too many sounds, even add a few sounds or sweeps. i think something need to happen, try working on a riff or a few stabs...make it build into something, bacuase its a good tune to work with...just sit back, take ya time and work some sounds and turn this tune into a funky monster! ;)
    Be Lucky!

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    Junior Freak
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    Quote Originally Posted by fatcollective
    ok mate, heres my tips....firstly i think you have a great base of a tune here, and i do like it, simular to what i like to produce...i think some of the drops dropped a little flat, so try and make them a bit more exciting, maybe dont drop out too many sounds, even add a few sounds or sweeps. i think something need to happen, try working on a riff or a few stabs...make it build into something, bacuase its a good tune to work with...just sit back, take ya time and work some sounds and turn this tune into a funky monster! ;)
    thank you very much..
    good tips..

    i try to rework the track.

    or i will start another one with more flavour. :lol:
    www.nightgen.com

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    Junior Freak
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    @ fatcollective: thx for the tips the review follows in a few days

    :hmm: new ideas will give the track a new face
    www.nightgen.com

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