I really love some of the elements in it, the rising
synths and builds of the acid lines are very nice.
I like the layering of the synths for percussive effects.
I'd look into the structure in some places, but for the
most part it sounds wild.
The kick could use maybe just a tad little more bass
and in terms of structure, let the elements build a little
slower on the bars. I like where this is going though, I
think its definetly got an older school trance feel. Which
is super refreshing.

Getaloadofthis-
Very much the structure i was thinking of, a little more
of a defined build in elements. The spinback on the top
of the break sounds a little misplaced might wanna check
that. Kicks are a little nicer, think the perc/bassline are a
little clearer than the other song.

Overall I like the first better, but the second has its structure
a little more evened out. I think they are both nice bases to
build from and you've got a unique take on trance, don't lose
that and you'll be solid. : )

-&rew