Hey Curly, your from the polymorphic southend/biosystem etc lot?
I`m from southend (although a long time ago) and would love to know whats going on in the old place), and if there are some gigs going on, I`d love to play in my old town to see old faces etc.

As for your tune.

It`s interesting, but none of the sounds really stand out, as they all seem too quite, and very flat in terms of eq.
Also the top end is non existant, and this means there is a lack of energy. Shove some hats n stuff in there to excite the high end frequencies, and use a lot of eq to bring out the other elements and fit them together more effectively.