This has a nice feel, if slightly dated, and reminds me a little bit of Terry Lee Brown Jnr.
Needs a lot of work on the production though.
There is hardely any definition in the mix at all, apart from on that rhodes organ.
The hats and stuff need to be much crisper, the bass needs to be much deeper, and there needs to be much more separation between the sounds.
Also, the second bleepy type synth just doesn`t work, it`s not only in the wrong key, but even if it is meant to be disharmonic, it`s not a disharmony that works.
When you are going for this real slick and polished Tech-House sound, you really need to work extra hard on the production as you are moving into a production standard that is on average, higher than what you can get away with in techno.

Those bleeps could be a lot fuller, and I would use something like a DX7/FM7 to produce them, so you get lots of depth.
The bass needs to be real warm and soft, and saturated.

This has loads of promise, but to get to standard you are really gonna have to work it.