Well, I`m not a fan of looped based stuff at all.
but I do like the editing in this, it makes things more interesting.
Overall the production is very muddy, and lacks clarity in the mid range.
Also when making stuff like this the quality is dependant entirely on the quality of the loops. And as reason has pretty useless EQ the loops that you have ended up with lack proper depth and range.
I would strip this back and maybe go back into reason and break the loops down into their disparate elements, allowing more control over the sound when they are exported into Acid, as it has a better EQ.