to comment on the tune thou, lol...

i thnik it is a wee bit too linear for my liking, not enough going on, i thnk that the bass synth should come in slightly earlier, as its approx half way though the track until we start to hear it...

maybe drop the main synth during sections of the breakdown at the start and/or the HH...?

the percussion and kick do sound good though, i like the compression which gives a that classic pumping effect ;)

my two cents anyway...

/yorkii :)