It took me quite a while to get the link to work, and my connection was always really bad, it kept stopping every 20 secs or so, so it was hard to listen to.
If you want some honest feedback, then I would say that you could improve on your mixing skills. Your track selection is excellent, nice progression, although I would personally ditch the nudity thing at the start - I don't really see the relevance to the mix.
Is this by any chance done on mp3?