yeah i really like the drum groove..
I dont think the bass needed to be much bigger - just more defined.. Its sounds a bit flabby now to my ears. I think the bass is getting in the way of that wicked drum groove a bit now - i prefer the airy sound it had on the first mix.
Rather than boost the sub i would have changed the bass to a more rolling b-line with more presence at around 100hz rather than flabby sub on and off the beat, i think it would do that drum groove a little more justice - but thats just personal preference more than anything id say ;)
Also some of the non grrove stuff is a little loopy.. one sound coming in, pooing and then dropping out for another to come in and loop.. nowt wrong if thats what you were going for but its quite an old skool way of sequencing.
As Db says, it could do with a master, and in these kind of tracks its mastering that makes all the difference.
I would try and open up the top end just a tad more before mastering though.
Anyway, overall yeah i do like it nice vocoded shit - particularly the less loopy bits. Sorry if its seems like ive really broken it apart, i do really like it so im trying to be as constructive on it as possible for you :)