first off all after just listening to the whole track ive gotta say i really like the sequence, i reckon this has got a lot of potential.

youve got a good arrangement there, its just in need of production work.

id try cutting away some of the bass lines mid freq a little, get the kick compression and bass line compression sorted solo, find the best balan between the too then compress them both together, get them sitting together better.

i think once youve done that youl find more room will open up.
you could also widen out the track, the percussion is pretty much center,panning out slightly would help.

its not very dynamic at the moment either, once youve got the mixdown sorted id give the export a run through a multi band dynamics comp and give it a more spacious sound.

i definetly like this so far though, with the right processing it could sound like an old airwave track