Quote Originally Posted by fatcollective
ok mate, heres my tips....firstly i think you have a great base of a tune here, and i do like it, simular to what i like to produce...i think some of the drops dropped a little flat, so try and make them a bit more exciting, maybe dont drop out too many sounds, even add a few sounds or sweeps. i think something need to happen, try working on a riff or a few stabs...make it build into something, bacuase its a good tune to work with...just sit back, take ya time and work some sounds and turn this tune into a funky monster! ;)
thank you very much..
good tips..

i try to rework the track.

or i will start another one with more flavour. :lol: