The production is nice, but in terms of the tune itself, by about the 3 minute mark, I was already a bit bored. This kind of techno is so old now, I think to make it worthwhile you really need to do something that stands out.
Try adding a lot more crazy edits, and some kind of activity after the break that adds more energy than the tune had before it.
Maybe some more crazy synth action or something.
But there was loads of stuff around like this in 1999 so I think maybe you need to check out more techno to get an idea of what is going on these days.