wikid, mate. oldskool shit :love:
i'd suggest you have the track start more minimal, i.e the chord/pad/string being quieter, filtered, or you bring it in later, that would create an even bigger emotional impact :!:
in addition to that i think some filtered (female) vocal snippets whispering or something (+veeeerb) would be superb, i reckon.
alltogether make the dominating melodic sound a little quieter, maybe drop it at times or do that with some filter action (sweeping).
the bassline is so good, you can have it running without the pad (or whatever) sound accompanying it, i think it should generally stand out just that little more (saturate/distort/maxxbas maybe), the strings being the icing on the cake.
just some ideas, but that tracks is definitely beautiful as it is. :love:
cheers,
loopdon