some good ideas, but needs more work to really make it into a standout track, its very much a locked groove at the moment baring the edits... kick needs tightening a little more id say plus the hats are too loud and seem to phase from left to right on each hit which maybe for effect but i found it a bit annoying and un-natural...

really like the bass and kick tho nice bumpy feel to it

wud be interested to hear the finished version