offbeat track

**charlton** · 18-01-2005, 10:13 PM

its not mixt yet so i hope you wile like this one

www.deepinthenight.com/charlton/02.mp3

**tooltech** · 19-01-2005, 07:45 AM

nice one.

but it needs a little bit more percussion ;)

**charlton** · 19-01-2005, 09:41 AM

Originally Posted by tooltech

nice one.

but it needs a little bit more percussion ;)

thanx for the the advice

**duffdeal** · 20-01-2005, 10:06 AM

I really like this. I think the kick needs a bit of work, needs to be punchier.

**charlton** · 20-01-2005, 11:50 AM

Originally Posted by duffdeal

I really like this. I think the kick needs a bit of work, needs to be punchier.

thnax im giong 2 work on it

**professor** · 20-01-2005, 02:36 PM

are you using reason? this has the sound of reason...just a little flat all over...
despite the sound, I liked the composition...keep it up!

**Jack** · 20-01-2005, 10:32 PM

nice dark track.
treble seems a bit weak and in need of more.
melody is moody. :clap:

**charlton** · 28-01-2005, 06:46 PM

Originally Posted by Jack

nice dark track.
treble seems a bit weak and in need of more.
melody is moody. :clap:

thanks mate im working on it for sure

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