what you have is a very tight, well produced acid techno track here. all the elements are right and then the bass is just way too much.

think of it like this. the bass is supposed to add to what you've already done. you've brought it in a totally the right moment, i'm not disputing that. and the notes of the bass are good. but the bass absolutely just dominates everything!

the only about this track is that bass. get that right and i think you've got something 100% releasable. please (for me) turn that bass down by about 2 db.

what i'm saying about making it 'lower' is taking out the mid freq's and making it more rumbly. instead of it feeling like you're riding a horse (which it sounds like at the moment), make it sound like you're in a racing car with micheal schumachers girlfriend riding the gearstick at 150 mph.