Not a bad start man.. pretty laid back and loungey.
Bass is a bit better than your usual .... oomph-wise. ;)

The second synth I'm not so sure about.... its like your having this nice chill pool party and suddenly aliens come down from the sky and start blastin lasers at everyone.. and people go apeshit.. the mood is destroyed... etc

:lol: :lol:

Cheers ;)