I like this, spooky doom techno.

Production needs work.

There is distortion in the bass, that could be solved by sidechaining the bass to the kick, and maybe taking down the overall level on the master.

There`s a gap right in the middle of the mid range that could be filled, maybe a grungy but simple percussion loop would do it?

The ride is also too high in the mix

This is very simple, but effective, soundtrack-like techno.

Please post a more polished version when you do it.