David F- Outer Limits

[audioinjection]

Thought i'd post up this one, its a bit harder than I usually do.

but some feedback would be great, i havent really attempted to make hard stuff, but starting to now

http://www.audioinjection.com/tracks/Outer%20Limits.mp3

[BRADLEE]

David, this track is the shit. You already know I love this one man. Please, keep it up and keep making this type of harder stuff. But you need a guise for it. This way to distinguish between your funky materials and the hard ones.

Amazing shit though man...You're one of the most on point cats I know. :clap:

[xfive]

Very nice man keep'r goin ;) :clap:

[The Overfiend]

That's what I'm talking about D!
Wait till it's me you an Brad I think in a month or so?

[xfive]

hahahahaha

I can picture you three fighting over the keyboard and mouse already
LOL

:lol: :lol:

[BRADLEE]

That's what I'm talking about D!
Wait till it's me you an Brad I think in a month or so?

Amen to that my man...April it is

[EmotionComplex]

i like this very much, love the deep vibe. i think this would be a good track to submit to mark for the blackout forum release :)

[AcidTrash]

liked how it started and the main techno thrust was ****ing wicked but the synth wash noise is one i've always disliked.

[Jay Sanders]

Wicked Tuneage!!!

[Komplex]

Nice n TOUGH :)

[Komplex]

BUT, that synth lead is kinda not quite right. Its too sad sounding for the toughness of this track.

[audioinjection]

thanks for the feedback guys, i appreciate it!

[Tyrisia]

Sorry to go against the grain, but your other stuff has much more thought put into the programming, and I don't wanna say this, but this particular track comes accross a bit bland imho. Ok, it's got a fuller beat, but that's where it ends for me, I think with a bit more synth action this might work, that seems to be your trademark, and I think you should carry that accross if you're gonna have a go at the harder stuff, coz a hard beat is a hard beat, but it's how you personalise it that counts.

[AcidMutant]

I'm really liking this stuff but there are 2 things I would address-

1) Levels: The bleepy line that goes through the track is a possibly a little low.

2) Variation: The bleepy synth line is a bit too static and would really benifit from some extra programming to keep it more alive:

I'm thinking taking the loop, cutting it in 1/2 (removing the last note) and repeating the first half to create a variation then pasting this infront of a copy of the original loop.

It's a good trick and you can repeat the process with smaller and smaller cut and pastes till you get down to just the first note rattling!

[audioinjection]

yeah, i hear ya..............this is pretty much my first attempt at some hard stuff, so i still dont know all the ingrediants, but working on it

i'll still be messing w/ this some more, see how it turns out

and thanks for all you input