Interesting, I like the industrial sounds.
I like the track actually.

Overall I think the sound is very flat though. This may be due to over compression, but there doesn`t seem to be enough depth and lushness.

The bass seems clipped and could go lower, sitting underneath the kick While the kick itself could do with more presence.

There`s a big gap right slap bang in the mid range, down to the low mid.
A lot of people have trouble filling this gap as it is difficult to pin it down with your ears. But another little percussion loop squeezed in should do it.

With some more lush finishing and mastering, I reckon this may be a winner, and is one of the more original tunes I`ve heard come out of F.A.T towers.