A.P. - F.A.T Collective - SPL Re-worked

[A.P.]

This is the first time i have uploaded one of my tracks to this forum or even the internet, let me know what you think ppl!

LINK UPDATED!!!!!!!!
http://www.fatcollective.com/SPL_re_worked.mp3
LINK UPDATED!!!!!!!!

[j_s]

really punchy sound. a little obvious in the groove & arrangement though. the break is cool + the track gets more intersting as it progresses, but it feels somewhat repetitive.....

[A.P.]

Thanks for ur feedback man!

[AcidTrash]

The best I've heard on BOA so far this morning. Me likey. Could do a bit more tho.

[fatcollective]

This is good stuff. Well ard
Nice sounds, Driving percussion. Could just do with a bit of spice on the arrangement tho

[A.P.]

;) Ive re-worked this track, i will post it up again very soon, see what you think guys

[A.P.]

what do you think of the re-worked version then guys????

[dirty_bass]

Interesting, I like the industrial sounds.
I like the track actually.

Overall I think the sound is very flat though. This may be due to over compression, but there doesn`t seem to be enough depth and lushness.

The bass seems clipped and could go lower, sitting underneath the kick While the kick itself could do with more presence.

There`s a big gap right slap bang in the mid range, down to the low mid.
A lot of people have trouble filling this gap as it is difficult to pin it down with your ears. But another little percussion loop squeezed in should do it.

With some more lush finishing and mastering, I reckon this may be a winner, and is one of the more original tunes I`ve heard come out of F.A.T towers.

[audioinjection]

yeah this sounds pretty cool, nice groove and feel to it, it bit plain to my liking, but still phat

wish it was a better quality mp3 though, i might be able to judge more accurately

[A.P.]

Hi guy's, thanks for your feedback and info, much appreciated

[dan the acid man]

this is a really good track, lovely synth work, like dirty bass said, theres a few frequencies that need filling, but apart from that, this is spot on

[fatcollective]

well done allan..this sounds great. loads of hard techno nrg. Really cool verb on that stab also love the funky percussion and the way the kick sits. i would play this out, definately my kind of tuneage :clap: :clap:

[Lorenzo_Shivu]

well done indeed man! it's a bit simple but the groove, synths and beats def. have a drive! keep it up man! Btw I reckon this is releasable stuff man!

Love,
L

[A.P.]

[xfive]

This was nice.. groovy with some cool edits. I think Steve pretty much covered all of the technical aspects.

Could do with a bit more maybe extra element wise past the half way marker or so.

;)

[A.P.]

Some good feedback there people, nice 1 :lol:

[A.P.]

[BloodStar]

nice track. sounds a bit dry,as mentioned above, but nice elements in it. i think you could get much much more of it, with using more compression. maybe more work on stereo would also help... nice!

[A.P.]

nice track. sounds a bit dry,as mentioned above, but nice elements in it. i think you could get much much more of it, with using more compression. maybe more work on stereo would also help... nice!

[A.P.]

;) :lol: ;)