I don`t personally like this, but I do think it is one of your better tracks.

There`s an overall muddyness that needs to be sorted.
I think better separation of the sounds, and especially a clean up from the low-mid, down would help.
The bass is definitely too much in terms of balance (and I do love bass)
The mid and top end needs more character and presence, and I would say one final element would be nice to make things more interesting after the half way point.

Good though.