Nice. Sounds like you had fun.

The first thing that hits me though, is those kicks. Sounds like they aren`t lined up properly and are blatting.

I think maybe the main synth pad, the really bright one, could do with being a bit warmer and with more depth, maybe double it up and repeat the chord under itself an octave down, as it comes across too abrasive.

It`s a nice experiement in analogue, but it seems to lack warmth overall, so to me, it sounds liek it could have been done on a PC anyway.
It`s also maybe a little simple and sounds very old.
Akthough if this is what you were trying to get, then cool.

I think this works best at about 6:28