I like it!!! Has alot of energy and builds nicely, especially after the firstbreak down, could imagine me raving good style too it - Anyway heres my critque, for what its worth:-
You need to bring the synth in earlier as it becomes quite repetative. Also, kick could probably do with tightening up a little. I like the main loop and the patterns with the kickdrum are well done. I quite like the filter sweeps in the breakdown, but I'm not really feeling the vocal (but thats always been a preference of mine, I've never been massive on vocals in techno tracks). Once the track kicks back in, energy levels are high and thats certainly a good thing. I think overall there needs to be more elements in this track, not quite sure what though. Breakdown at 4:40 fits well, enjoyed the weird synth thing. I think overall, the kick and snares need to be clearer, the kick/snares sound a bit lonely (if that makes sense).