hi andy.

some constructive criticism

track 1.

i like the concept of the track, there are some good elements there
you need to cut the track time to 5-7 mins.
compress the elements of the track so they happen sooner
drop back the kick - try to make sure it sits at about -6db and no higher, this will then bring up the pads sounds etc into the mix.
try using delays on some of the elements.
What program are you using? be careful with the hats, they sound far too lose.

Track 2.

the snare is wickked here, really like it. It works well with the kick
Again you need to make the sequnece more dynamic, keep up the interest
the pad sounds and the growly other stuff are really nice, love them - bring em up sonshine, want to hear more o that...!
Bring the bass in earlier....

Hope this helps! and thanks for posting andy, keep em coming!