Track one:-

Kick sounds quite dull and flat. The way it stutters and delays is a good idea and I see what your tying to do but it sounds 'difficult' and almost out of time, definitely has potential though. I think with techno you need to be careful about what you do with the kick, after all most techno is just noise that revolves around the kick.

That said, I'm enjoying the track but it sounds quite seperated and empty. As suggested you should bring the elements closer together. The tracks also crying out for a bassline to carry it. I'm not really feeling the snares, as mentioned they sound too loose, at least they do in my opinion anyway. The production of the track is poor as well, but to produce well just takes time, believe me I feel you, I'm trying despretely hard to get my standard up as well.

5:10+ -: enjoyin the bassline alot but dosnt really come through. Try lowering the kicks and adding EQing and compression (easier said than done!). Also, the tracks way too long and becomes quite repetative but this can be solved simply by cutting it and bring the elements closer together. Because I dont think the songs boring at all, infact its quite good but as mentioned just suffers from poor production and a few other problems as stated.

I'll listen to track 2 tomorrow cos I'm meant to be doing an essay. But I've tried to be constructive so I hope it dosnt sound like im dissing it, I think you've figured out the formula to techno fairly well and just need to do alot of work on your production skills. But as I'm finding out, this is difficult and time-consuming - but not much achieved that is great was ever easy. Keep at it!