No I understand, I`ve cleaned this up and will have it reposted soon.
That first mixdown was the product of a 4 hour frenzy in the studio, from conception to master, to try to cure my insomnia.
The "acid" riff actually slowly morphs into the washy synth sound that you hear as the second half progresses, it is the same synth.
I`ve brought that forward in the mix too.
I understand what you are saying about the more emotion thing.
But with this track I wanted to make something more straight, banging, with some mesmerising effects, rather than a strong emotional melody.
However the next, more industrial Voidloss tune I am working on, is more in the vein of what you were describing.