sounds good , id say defo needs some effects ,some delay on the percs
may be some reverb on them , snare needs to be more in ur face.

kick drum is banging , not sure on the sounds used , but then
again depends on wat sort of trance ur makeing.

melody is exellent , very backroom ,very ambient .

not bad at all give urself a pat on the back. :clap: :clap:

ps. add some eq on the percs aswell