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    Default Arty Visual - A Dark Portrait (a downtempo track)

    wrote a downtempo track called a dark portrait...
    A Dark Portrait
    http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvis...20portrait.mp3

    and i posted these two tracks previously but in the wrong forum...


    Mantra
    http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvis...nmastered).mp3
    The Driving Digeridoo
    http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvis...0Digeridoo.mp3



    please post comments if you have any...constructive criticism...etc
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    Default Re: Arty Visual - A Dark Portrait (a downtempo track)

    The Driving Digeridoo
    This is cool, not heard many tracks in this vein before. Like the organic feel. Treble could be brighter, but the mix is quite clear & distinct,

    Mantra
    This sounds quite interesting too. I think the production lets it down though, the kick is quite flabby and there seems to be clipping in a few places. You'd probably benefit from going over the eq again, cos theres some cool ideas in this that don't quite have the impact they could have....

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    I`m not really into the music, it`s a little too tribal drift for me.
    But the production is pretty tight.

    On mantra there`s a distortion problem with the kicks that sounds out of place, and I`d take a look at what is causing that.


    the Driving didgeredoo is a little flat, and could do with more depth in the low end, and more brightness at the top.
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