Tune was nice.
Found the production to be very bland and flat. Nothng stood out or sparkled.
The hats had no bite or zing.
The kick had no depth or punch.
No sub at all other than that of the kick?
The synth stabs were very dry and needed some verb and delay to create more interesting movement. They sounded very much like a preset straight off of a VST instrument.
The main pads also lacked movement and presence that some good compression and excitation would add, maybe also a little movement via an lfo assigned filter or something.
the only real energy is provided by the rides, that out sparkle everything.

Overall a good tune let down by lackluster production.