is new file coming from the same link?
If it is ive listened again, and the same problems are present mate...
I tell you what to do, get the mix & turn the volume right down, so its really quiet... when it gets to the white noise bit you should really hear now its way, way too loud.. another thing is with white noise, dont forget it covers the whole frequnecy range, you need to take a load of top end off as well as lowering the volume... try and get it 'sitting under' the hats & rides... try and make it so when the white noise thing ends there isnt a percieved loss of power or pressence... at the moment, after the white noise thing ends, everything else seems dull in comparision...
The kick drum problem is still there BTW.. are they loops with kicks youve got on the go, or are they just single kick drum hits?
I know you can sort it really easy, then this tune will be finished IMO