Quote Originally Posted by lau
Aightt bitchezz you got me all inspired.... thats a nice track!!!...

Tends to get kinda loopy at some points ( and its only 2.30 long..I know its the first version, but its only to point out the loopy-ness..)
so that definitly needs some work... Just edit the sh*t out of it and Im sure its gonna be great tune....

Just one technical pointer... I dont know why it happens... I vaguely remember DB explaining it in a topic somewhere... but at 0.53 sec when the kick comes in its a lot louder than in the rest of the song.. I know I had these probelems too when I over compressed the kick somehow it appears to be louder when it kicks in... ennieways.. maybe you did that becoz you liked it.. thats also a possibility...

waiting for the next version
ah this is a compression issue.

The compressor is only kicking in after the first kick.
A shorter attack would help, well there are a few things that can be done.