[Hard Trance ] Feedback on new tune - Richie V

[Starfuqer]

Hey guys

Working on the mixdown of this new tune
Any feedback is appreciated

here is a LOFI version for the dial up people
http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/RichieV-03.mp3


and a more hi fi version


http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/RichieV-03b.mp3

thanks