Quote Originally Posted by eyes without a face

as for the track.... errr..... i dont want to comment for risk of offence im sorry
Yes! Thats the kind of stuff I want to hear. Thanks for all the crits. It helps me step back and try to rethink some ideas.

Its important for me that the piano rhythm stays the way it is and the notes remain simple. It'll take alot of work to turn the whole track into a solid groove. I've been experimenting with different beats on this one, and ended up someplace different. I'll try to find another way to bring out the high and low frequencies and add more variation to the piano.

The drum sounds were taken from the freesound archive. A group trying to build a database of open source samples.
http://freesound.iua.upf.edu/