[Hard Trance ] Feedback on new tune - Richie V

[Starfuqer]

Hey guys

Working on the mixdown of this new tune
Any feedback is appreciated

here is a LOFI version for the dial up people
http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/RichieV-03.mp3


and a more hi fi version


http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/RichieV-03b.mp3

thanks

[EmotionComplex]

the first thing id comment on is the sample youve used, its an entirely personal opinion but it stood out to me, i dont think is fitting very well at the moment,. "i said away goes trouble down the drain" when its repeated midway works quite well i think, id personally loose the rest of the sample and keep that section and also "theres not a problem that i cant fix" as the complimenting sample, i dont think the track needs the rest of the vocal.

that personal opinion aside the tracks sounding anthem / overdose destined to me, its pretty good but very dry, all the elemts are there but because there so dry the track is sounding a little empty, there needs to be more activity and depth to the instruments i think.

i think its just a matter of constructively eq ing and effecting of parts.

id say this wouldnt have any problems finding a release after a little more work