'ello
Have spent a fair bit of time reworking a couple of tracks, and would appreciate feedback from all you lovely people.
Links are here:
www.logarythms.com/riggle.mp3
www.logarythms.com/whellan.mp3
Multi thankyous
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Thread: Riggle & Whellan reworked
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18-04-2005, 11:28 AM #1BOA Lifetime Member
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Riggle & Whellan reworked
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18-04-2005, 12:03 PM #2BOA Mod
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Hello Jay. Thanks for posting. i preferd the second tune. I think perhaps you need some more tonal changes, the tune sounded smooth. so perhaps a few distorted counterpoints might help this one along. the breakdown at 3 minutes was a touch weak. perhaps you could bring in another element here.
HTH
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18-04-2005, 12:14 PM #3Supreme Freak
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Liked the second one as well...!!!
though it sounds a bit unfinished.. I'm missing some funky shakers there... maybe fill it up a bit...
production is good..
:clap:Even beethoven had his critics!
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18-04-2005, 09:27 PM #4BOA Lifetime Member
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Quite good work indeed. I liked both of them really.
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21-04-2005, 04:10 PM #5BOA Lifetime Member
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Cheers for feedback peeps.
Had the opportunity to test them both on a club soundsytem earlier in the week. Riggle sounded pretty rubbish, but whellan sounded spot on. Which is good, but also a bit irritating because I'm not sure how to repair the first one, so I will most likely give up on it. Its starting to piss me off anyway, and getting fed up of your own tunes is rubbish.
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