Riggle & Whellan reworked

[Jay Pace]

'ello

Have spent a fair bit of time reworking a couple of tracks, and would appreciate feedback from all you lovely people.

Links are here:

www.logarythms.com/riggle.mp3

www.logarythms.com/whellan.mp3

Multi thankyous

[RDR]

Hello Jay. Thanks for posting. i preferd the second tune. I think perhaps you need some more tonal changes, the tune sounded smooth. so perhaps a few distorted counterpoints might help this one along. the breakdown at 3 minutes was a touch weak. perhaps you could bring in another element here.

HTH

[lau]

Liked the second one as well...!!!

though it sounds a bit unfinished.. I'm missing some funky shakers there... maybe fill it up a bit...

production is good..

:clap:

[BRADLEE]

Quite good work indeed. I liked both of them really.

[Jay Pace]

Cheers for feedback peeps.

Had the opportunity to test them both on a club soundsytem earlier in the week. Riggle sounded pretty rubbish, but whellan sounded spot on. Which is good, but also a bit irritating because I'm not sure how to repair the first one, so I will most likely give up on it. Its starting to piss me off anyway, and getting fed up of your own tunes is rubbish.