Sounds really hard and aggressive to me. I like the huge distorted kick drum personally. This is border line SCHRANZ to me. All in all I like where you're going with it, but it does seem to need some personal touches. Just something that feeds off your personality in my opninion.
Although man I had to go back and edit my post because I really do enjoy this track quite well. Some finely tuned little kick edits in here that really keep this machine on the move. :clap: