just listend now,
kick isnt as clear as it could be on this, bass has a little too much reverb, but the fist few mintues are pretty neat so far. youve filterd that melody wickedly, great way to introduce it, needs more power on that kick when the tune comes in fully, abit unexpected and random, needs more drama. lol, few more dynamic SSSWWWWOOOOSSSHHHESS, and yourll be sorted!!