hmm.. not too sure about this one, the kick is too loud that definately needs bringing down, and the sounds overall are quite dry i found dude.... also, ive noticed ur drums always tend to sound similiar and very stiff, are u using redrum or a 909 emulator of some sort? needs a more organic feel overall, more looseness and space in the mix, sounds quite dry and as i said quite stiff if u get me?

the bass synth was a nice pattern i found but didnt go low enough and also i wud personally maybe play around with the pattern, swap a few notes around and make it swing more against the percussions, so its not kinda just 1 2 1 2 if u get me