You know I veery much liek the idea and basic structure of the tune. All of the sounds seem to fit very well together. I think you should maybe add an additional pattern to the guitar/synth pattern though to give the track more movement. Also, maybe add a couple of filter sweeps to help keep it moving along. Right now that sound just runs thru the whole tune without really changing. Also one more thing that would be really cool is if you added a nice sample from a movie or something in the break. Would give the listener something else to ponder for a moment...Then after the break, take a snip of a vocal and use it as a stab noise as well. I think that would also be fitting...

Sorry I'm not trying to be critical but just helpful. I hope my rambling makes sense amiogo.