Seeing as this is a headphones job, I won`t comment on the production as it ain`t representing your skills.
Tune wise this is very similar sounding to your live PA
It`s got that real stark, epic, spaceous kind of feel, and I like it.
It`s hard, but it has more emotional scope than just your typical teenage hard techno anger and there is more space in the mix for the sounds too breathe, so it doesn`t have that racing to the destination, and not paying attention to the scenery crap that a lot of high speed techno does.
I really like this new style dude, I`d love to hear some finished versions when you get em done.