Well if you ask me, the kick could do with tightening up a little to get it some more punch. I like the percusion, seems to come through the mix well enough. Needs to move quicker though, seems to get a bit repetative maybe. After the mixdown, I think you need another element to come in as it feels like the track hasnt progressed anywhere in particular. Overall though, decent production, kinda reminds me of recycled loops stuff.