Think personally you should do something better with the snares that come in fairly early, they sound too oldskool and just a bit flat and boring. Get rid of them completely, they dont sit rythemically at all. I like the vocal and the kick is fairly good as well, decent track if not sounding a little dated these days... Ah nice! Once its back in, I like it. Nice and kicking. Mix sounds like its a little muddy and crowded in places though, some decent compression will sort that out.

Decent track man overall.