I`m not a fan of this retro stuff to be honest, so I can`t really comment too much on the tune.

Production wise, I don`t think this is near release ready yet.

As a whole the sound of this tune is too dry.

There`s no processing on any of the sounds to really make them blend together.

And for something that is trying to sound very analogue, it comes across as very digital and computery.

The low end could do with more warmth, and the kick needs a bit more room to breathe.

The main synth bass is a little over powering.

Also the top end could be a bit louder and crisper.

I can hear the kind of sound you are going for, but production wise this really needs some work to give it more fizz, and movement to stop it sounding so flat.