I like this style of tune very much.
Would agree with whats been said about the kick, it sounds sampled and abit plain. Maybe spend abit of time f**kin around with the kick ya know filtering a couple at the end of a 32 hear and there if that makes sense. Use your snares more, I think you only use them in your main break, get some funky little patterns going over the kick to keep the interest flowing.
I liked the way you moshed up your cornish underground vocal, enzyme stylee!
I thought the melody was quite cool as well, a little on the scott brown side but would still have me stompin!

resepka