I like it so far, but I think you should add just a touch more perc after the break later in the track for a bit more movement. Also some sort of cool FX automation would be good coming out of that break. It would be much more powerful and impactful going back into the whole track sequence.

I think maybe a tiny vocal snip for a stab would suit the purpose well, and maybe even a phased out distorted snare which could be added during the break.

although this is just my opnion. Still proper for the dancefloor as usual.

As for the mix down, sounds good to me, but I'm only in headphones.