I like the way you've used the NIN samples as well... they work really nicely, especially the 'help me' bit nearer the start. The lead up to the break on ~3.40 mins is good, the 'record stop' effect works well and is quite nicely unexpected - but I'm not too sure about the part after that, it sounds a trifle 'cluttered' - maybe you could lose some of the hats & clicky sounds? I'm not too keen on the synth that comes in on 4 mins to be honest - maybe it'd fit with the tune better if it was a bit distorted? It sounds a little out of place to my ears...

The mastering definitely needs some work as well - especially just after that main break the kick gets a bit lost and hard to pick out... in my head I want it to properly start going BOOM!

All the ingredients are definitely there though and it's nicely arranged - but for me the buildup works better than after the break... and all the way through the tune I was expecting to hear 'I wanna f*ck you like an animal' - stop teasing and drop that in somewhere! :lol: