definitely liking the idea of the tune. Sounds like it should be a corker on a loud system. Well arranged too. Mixdown I'm not the best at describing anyways, so I'll leave that up to those who are better in that area.

The only thing I'd say too, is maybe add a bit more individual flare to it. It sounds like some techno I've heard before in style. Just maybe add something else to set you apart from the rest with this.