[HARD TRANCE] RiSC - 1st Production EVER!

[matt1314]

Hallo all,

I guess i;ll do the usuall thing and say, "hello"

havent posted here b4, nor do I usually post anywhere im usually one of those lurkers :roll:

anywho, a mate and I started working on this track yesterday - it has only had a couple of hours put into it, what I want to know is are we heading in the right direction, or can anyone lend some constructive criticism on this production?
(ie; tips, things ive done wrong, improvements etc etc)

MADE USING: FLSTUDIO 5 (REASON running as slave rewire for percs ),

**Please note, this song is no where near the finished product, not even attempted to be sequenced properly, only made it so that you could get the idea of where i was going with this*** :unsure:

hopes to hear from u soon!


cheers
RiSC
>>> members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

[NFP]

Not bad your going in the right direction but need to focus more on your production put a bit of delay on the leads and not much but a bit of reverb for the leads to make them stand out a bit.
It's also clipping in a few places concentrate on that as well best thing to do is bring it back when its finished mate.
Check out the audio out on this site.
www.reaperrecords.tk

[matt1314]

awesome, cheers for the feedback mate! :lol:

[WEZ]

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

[dj vorny]

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

[cascade]

melody is well random, if you dont how to write the keep them simple in the begging , its clipping so try and bring everything down abit, add some reverbs to most parts, makes it sound abit more real, not bad for a first time, just keep goign init

[WEZ]

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

not my tune dude !!!!!!!!

i simply redid the link for him so peeps can download it !!!!

[dj vorny]

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

not my tune dude !!!!!!!!

i simply redid the link for him so peeps can download it !!!!

i know wez mate i was joking lol
but this track is realy cool for this guys first track like cascade said the melody needs working on but its not bad at all so far

[WEZ]

ive been real slack lately with listening to others ,

well

i say slack ,

zero time to write my own let alone listen to others i think ,

ive just downloaded everyones tunes from this forum from past month odd , ill give a few comments on them soon !

sorry peeps

[WEZ]

Track seems to be real flat sounding with no atmosphere at the moment.

Levels are ok and the ideas seem pretty sweet actually.

Liking the melody work , again all seems a little flat and preset.

work on some sweet fx and some catchy small breaks to bring the structure up to touch and make it flow better , things are jumping out and biting ya in the arse !

Schweet so far dude